Blurb, Round 2
So after so work, here is the 3rd draft of my Logline/Blurb.
Logline: One hundred years of peace and prosperity. War changes everything.
On the world of Zaria, Elves, magic and mythical beasts coexist beside rifles and railroads. The futures of two nations hang in the balance as rebels and revolutionaries trade gunfire with loyalists and tyrants.
A war on the other side of the world has awakened the nation of Ansgar from its century long slumber. Before the armies of Ansgar are able to sail to war, a rebellion threatens to tear the nation apart.
One paranoid king determined to keep control. Two brothers, each with their own agenda. One maverick rebel, leading a fight to freedom.
In a war, little is held back; in a revolution, nothing is safe.
Brilliant – I’m sold!